Friday, November 18, 2011

NaNoWriMo: Sample from 11/18/11

My last NaNoWriMo sample was romance. Here is a hint of horror from today. And yes, my novel is a super-hero story.:

Electra was sure that she had killed herself. She scolded her stupidity, while waiting for whatever the afterlife held for her. She lay in the dark, restrained unable to move. What horrors did the demons of hell have for her, she wondered. Perhaps this anticipation was part of their torture.

Suddenly a sliver of light appeared. Just as suddenly, most of that light was blocked as a dark figure approached from where the brightness originated. She could only fear what would happen when it touched her.

She screamed the cry of the damned.


  1. YAY superhero stories! I have a feeling she is about to be tortured by her nemesis.

  2. No torture in my book. I'm too squeaky clean for that ;) *Especially to a female character*

    Also, she's the 'villain', she's not dead, and the 'demon' is the 'hero'. ;) Don't worry, it will make sense in the context of the novel.


Feel free to comment, but please keep it PG-13 or cleaner. :)